I liked the part when the speaker talked. You made me think of all the times the speaker has gone in our class. Why did you decide to write about this?
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Kia ora Olive! Miss G here :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the part when the speaker talked. You made me think of all the times the speaker has gone in our class. Why did you decide to write about this?
I decided to write about it because I thought it was a interesting topic and makes people want to keep reading...
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hey olive khwan is here . i love the way you did this and my favourite part is when the speaker says_THE QUEEN HAS COME! ;0
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Olive,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way that you made it more exiting and fun. How did you get the idea of doing?
Hi Olive,
ReplyDeleteI love how you chose: If I was the queen for the day! If you were the queen what would you do? I'm exited for chapter 3 :D
Amani
HI EMILY HERE I WANT MORE IT IS GREaT
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