Hi Olive, I like you nature writing. I have not heard someone describe red branches as sunburnt, great word choice! Also now that I read it when I look up through the leaves on a sunny day it does remind me of a kaleidoscope.
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Great job Olive.
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ReplyDeleteI like you nature writing. I have not heard someone describe red branches as sunburnt, great word choice! Also now that I read it when I look up through the leaves on a sunny day it does remind me of a kaleidoscope.
Great Job Olive in completing your work. I like the way you did your vocabulary activity and made sure you have added all the words.
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