Awesome learning Olive. Looking at your food pyramid, I can see you understand what foods you need to eat most and what you need to eat least. Great piece of narrative writing. Well done for using paragraphs and giving titles to your paragraphs so everyone knows what information can they find in the paragraph.
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Awesome learning Olive. Looking at your food pyramid, I can see you understand what foods you need to eat most and what you need to eat least. Great piece of narrative writing. Well done for using paragraphs and giving titles to your paragraphs so everyone knows what information can they find in the paragraph.
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