Date: 29.6.2021
purpose: to narrate
Audience: Kaylan, Isabella, Mum, Dad, James.
RT: Use punctuation
NL: What is a sentence
I was on my way, the air was warm and I felt better than ever! This was sure to be a good night! But than the worst of the worst hapend! The car started slowing down as we could hear a *put* *Put* *Put* and then the car STOPPED!!!! How was I going to get there in time?! The show started in 3 minutes and for us to drive, it was 2, but to walk, it was!! And to make matters worse I COULD NOT be late because I was doing the opening dance!! Ya' know what I did though? Remembered when me and my Dad were scooting around and there was a walkway-or a SHORTCUT to school!!!! So, I said "Come! Follow me! I know the way!!" i lead my family down the walk way and to school! We were there JUST in time all thanks to ME!
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